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Anyway, The March Challenge prompt is on the subject of cleaning one's closets. Writer's Island's prompt is 'inseparable.' I wrote the Writer's Island prompt this AM (quatrains and couplets) but The March Challenge poem (a pantoum) was written a few years ago, and first appeared in Sol Magazine and then later, in my book Mugging for the Camera. It just seemed kind of apropos.
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Joined at the Hip
If split up, the damage could be irreparable.
These things are completely and wholly inseparable…
burger & fries,
chips & fish,
cup & saucer,
spoon & dish,
bacon & eggs,
sugar & spice,
bread & butter,
naughty & nice,
peas & carrots,
cookies & cream,
salt & pepper,
balance & beam,
knife & fork,
pb & j,
salsa & chips,
night & day,
spaghetti & meatballs,
crackers & cheese,
paper & pencil,
thank you & please,
summer & winter,
spring & fall,
Yogi & BooBoo,
bat & ball.
The pairs above are kind of ‘joined at the hip.’
Just keep ‘em together – that is my best tip.
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Closet Avoidance
I am going to clean out my closet.
Who knows what strange things I might find?
Perhaps in a trunk, I'll find a lost sock
or a book or a hint of the past. Who knows? Certainly not I.
Who knows what strange things I might find?
I'm fearful I might turn up a ghost (in a matter of speaking)
or a book or a hint of the past. Who knows? Certainly not I.
I'm a serial packrat and an unrepentant procrastinator; my family is baffled.
I'm fearful I might turn up a ghost (in a matter of speaking.)
Maybe I really should put the whole thing off - for now.
I'm a serial packrat and an unrepentant procrastinator; my family is baffled.
I am going to clean out my closet.
Maybe tomorrow.
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RJ, you never cease to amaze me with your skill of form. Both are excellent.
ReplyDeletePamela
pb & j ????
ReplyDeleteI like your pantoum, a particularly irritating form to write!
Enjoyed both those. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteTwo wonderful treats! thanks.
ReplyDeleteMeryl
yay! i too am a packrat, enjoyed both the poems. simply splendid.
ReplyDeletesmart ones..
ReplyDeleteI posted my writer's island entry too.
cheers to you.
I've had a crazy few days and am just getting to these prompts and responses. I adore you inseparable piece. made me happy. simple as that... and I needed a bit of happy today. Here's my response:
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Pamela - thank you SO much!!!
ReplyDeleteViv - peanut butter and jelly. Thanks!
ReplyDeleteAnthony - thank you!
ReplyDeleteMeryl - thank you!
ReplyDeleteJingle - thanks for your kind words!
ReplyDeleteTrisha - lol! Thanks!
ReplyDeleteKim - thanks! And your poetry is divine!
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