Thursday, February 17, 2011

Undone: UnRaveled Knots and Broken Eggs

I'm running way behind today, so I'm just posting two wee writings.  One is based on the word prompt by SiS/Few Miles of 'Ravel' for the Haiku-a-Thon and the other is is based on a photograph prompt by Theme Thursday.  Cheers!

Image courtesy of Maurice Ravel - Frontispiece

Ravel

a French composer
who was known for creating
the Bolero … [k]not.

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Scrambled

That broken egg
did segue
to an omelette
I et.

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10 comments:

  1. AnonymousFebruary 17, 2011 at 9:48 PM

    Mad cool, particularly the second one :)

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  2. flaubertFebruary 17, 2011 at 9:55 PM

    Love them, RJ.
    My favourite is the second one.

    Pamela

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  3. Dave KingFebruary 18, 2011 at 6:16 AM

    Brilliant!

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  4. Someone is SpecialFebruary 18, 2011 at 10:52 AM

    Loved it RJ... No more words..

    Someone is Special

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  5. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallFebruary 18, 2011 at 12:05 PM

    powerful demonstration of the word.

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  6. RJ ClarkenFebruary 18, 2011 at 4:13 PM

    Lynnaima - thanks!!!

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  7. RJ ClarkenFebruary 18, 2011 at 4:18 PM

    Pamela - thanks! Actually, I'm not totally loving my poems for this prompt, but I wrote them late and fast, and I also, not everyone is gonna be a winner, Nevertheless, thanks for the nice words.

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  8. RJ ClarkenFebruary 18, 2011 at 4:20 PM

    Thank you, Dave!

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  9. RJ ClarkenFebruary 18, 2011 at 4:24 PM

    SiS - thank you!!! ☼

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  10. RJ ClarkenFebruary 18, 2011 at 4:26 PM

    Thanks so much Jingle! I come over to the rally when time permits a bit more! ♥

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