walking by the surf...
wondering if starfish stroll
underneath the waves
Old Mister Brown
Old Mister Brown lived there –
that house with yellow eaves.
Each morning, he’d go out
to buy a quart of milk.
He’d greet me, “So, Old Trout…”
Old Mister Brown lived there –
that house with shingles green.
Each day at two, he’d go
to play chess in the park.
He’d greet me, “Yes, hello.”
Old Mr. Brown lived there –
that house with weathered stairs.
Each night as twilight fell,
he watch as I’d pass by.
He’d greet me, “Hope you’re swell.”
Old Mister Brown lived there –
that house with winter’d trees.
He does not come outside
for friends or milk or chess,
but not because he died…
…he and a lady friend moved to Florida, which is where they now reside.
I say, good for old Mister Browne!
ReplyDelete120 - lol!
ReplyDeleteI got to quite like Mister Browne, there.
ReplyDeleteLovely words. Enjoyed them.
RJ, a nice story about Mister Browne.
ReplyDeleteWise choice on his part getting out
of the chilly weather.
Pamela
Thank you so much, Anthony!
ReplyDeleteYeah, Pamela. Right about now, Florida does sound kind of nice, Brrrr....
ReplyDeleteHaiku - I wonder that too!
ReplyDeleteOld Mister Brown - after this winter I want to join him! Great Magpie
Thanks so much, Kristen! ☼
ReplyDeleteLove the ending!! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks, Trellissimo! Endings should be fun, eh?
ReplyDeleteWhat fun, both of them.
ReplyDeleteMister Browne is ok now but what about those starfish?
have you found if they do?
I'd tread very lightly on the sand, just in case.
I feel like I'm going to enjoy following you.
Check me out too? I'm not always funny, though.
I see you have an eye for the ridiculous side of life! Great! :)
ReplyDelete"Old trout" is so endearing!
ReplyDeleteThat Brown is a smart fella.
ReplyDeleteFriko - thanks! And yes, I am definitely checking out your site because I like what I see there!
ReplyDeleteJinsky - ridiculous? Moi? hahaha! And thanks!
ReplyDeleteTess - thanks, Old Trout! ☼
ReplyDeleteOld Ollie - thanks - and indeed he is. (I should be so smart, staying up in FrozenLand!)
ReplyDeleteMr. Brown is quite the character! And I love your wondering about starfish.
ReplyDeleteWhat fun to read both these poems. I like the whimsey of the first and the zinger the set up of the second one. I like how each description of Mr. Brown's house begins each stanza and I think I know what happens but..zinger..he is in Florida..PERFECT!
ReplyDeleteAlways wondered about the "secret lives" of starfish ... thank you for sharing!
ReplyDeleteOld Mister Brown is precious ~~ liked the form all the way through and the unexpected "the end"! :-)
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed this post :)
ReplyDeleteCloakedMonk - thanks! ☼
ReplyDeleteWell, isn't this clever..and fun in the end..enjoyed this!
ReplyDeleteClever story of Mister Browne! Enjoyed that :)
ReplyDeleteAnd I loved the haiku.
Nice and interesting!Good for Miter Browne
ReplyDeleteMine:
http://umaspoembook.blogspot.com/2011/02/experimenting-with-poetry-forms-senryu.html
I loved it RJ... A great package for me..
ReplyDeleteSomeone is Special
Judy - thanks so much! It was fun writing both poems, although for different reasons. But I like that described them with words like whimsy and zinger! ♥
ReplyDeleteBecca - thank you so much - for all your sweet comments!
ReplyDeleteTilly Bud - thanks!!! ☼
ReplyDeleteLyn - thank you so much!!!
ReplyDeleteElizabeth - thanks! ☼
ReplyDeleteUma.a - thank you - and I will be visiting you in just a few...
ReplyDeleteAw...gee! Thank you, Someone is Special!
ReplyDeleteUnusual . . a poem with a twist ending.
ReplyDeleteLucy - unusual? Hmmmm...
ReplyDeleteWhat a hoot! Old Mr. Browne's sure a smart one!
ReplyDeleteTumblewords - thanks! And indeed, Old Mr. Brown was quite the smart cookie! ☼
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