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SiS/Few Miles proposed the word prompt of 'bliss' and Monday's Child posted a playful illustration by Jessie Wilcox Smith (1914) of a small garden party.
Of course, I thought of tea. Wouldn't you?
My first poem today is the ubiquitous 5/7/5 haiku and my second poem is a Canzonetta. So...sit back, take a nice comforting sip...and enjoy.
Tea & Books
“Tea and books – Mmmmmm, two of life's exquisite pleasures that together bring near-bliss.” ~Christine Hanrahan
I sippa cuppa
while reading a cozy book.
Ah, what bliss this is.
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Tea Party
Sipping some tea, just my monkey and me,
telling each other cute poems and tales,
pondering things like the crybaby tree
or potpourri - or the song of blue whales
or the word for “dot over ‘i’” (tittle!)
or bats (they turn left, leaving a cave.) ...Or…?
Then, we sip sweet tea, nibble a little.
We munch and we chat – since this we each savor.
Giggling at jokes, just my monkey and me,
telling each other some weird but true facts
like…porcupines float in water, you see
and slugs have four noses (strange to the max!)
I just found out snails can sleep for three years.
We really don’t know which fact is our fave...or…?
We try a new biscuit that’s known as ‘pig’s ears.’
We munch and we chat – since this we each savor.
Cleaning the dishes, my monkey and me.
He washes; I dry. We put away stuff.
He says, “Under black light, what glows? Cat pee!”
I laugh ‘til I cry out, “Gaaah, that’s enough!”
Tea with my monkey is always a blast.
I never can guess what might happen...or…?
Next week we’ll hoot once more, at our repast.
We'll munch and we'll chat – since this we each savor.
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Your poem is so darling...taking these two thru the day with their tea and stories...and great lessons learned...love the repetition with each verse including "my monkey and me" and "this we each savor"...a delight any young child would love....bkm
ReplyDeleteVery cute. I loved it!
ReplyDeleteRJ, what an adorable poem.
ReplyDeleteYou have a wonderful imagination.
Pamela
LOVE LOVE LOVE it!! As much as I am a coffee drinker, I am also a tea lover ... love different teas, tea etiquette, and tea "foods", tea parties and the entire experience of having tea. For some reason it is different than having coffee. Thank you for sharing. ~becca~
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the first one is bliss. the second one is hilarious.
ReplyDeletejust loved them and loved them.
trisha
http://sharmishthabasu.wordpress.com/2011/02/20/ivory-stairs/
Your haiku--spot on!
ReplyDeleteI am a tea drinker who enjoys nothing more than a milky cuppa and a good read. Lovely start to my day, RJ!
RJ, I took a sip of this wonderful post.. Thanks ...
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bkm...thanks so much! That was the effect I was hoping for - and you got it! Cool!
ReplyDeleteElaine - thanks so much!
ReplyDeletePamela - that's huge, coming from you! Thanks!
ReplyDeleteBecca - how funny you should say that! I am mostly a coffee drinker, too, although I adore chai latte and raspberry iced tea!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much!
Trisha - thanks! ♥
ReplyDeleteKim - thanks so much! And I hope your hand is doing better. Sending healing vibes your way. ☼
ReplyDeleteSiS - thanks! You are so sweet!
ReplyDeleteSweet, sweet take on the tea, just bliss!
ReplyDeleteLove the humor found within the twists of the second. Great write.
Reflections - thank you so much!!!
ReplyDeletePerfect haiku and I like the rhythm and repetition of the second. Little children would love to join in with this.
ReplyDeleteJabblog - thanks so much! I love writing for kids!
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ReplyDeleteSo many useful facts to remember..will just have to get me a monkey friend to "prompt" me..delightful!!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Lyn!!!
ReplyDeleteCute stories at this tea party. You are not the first to use the phrase 'my monkey and me', but it holds it together. I didn't think of the use of a repeated line like that. I'll try that next time.
ReplyDeleteBest wishes,
Anna
Anna's Monday's Child #34
A cup of tea and stories - lovely!
ReplyDeleteJust my kind of tea party. The world is strange and wonderful, like this poem.
ReplyDeleteI always love tea,
ReplyDeleteyour words are perfect.
well penned.
Anna - thank you! It's funny but as soon as I saw the illustration, I heard the words echo in my head, and they just kept repeating themselves.
ReplyDeletenimaruichi - thanks so much!
ReplyDeleteAndreas - thank you so very much for coming to my tea - and leaving such a nice comment!
ReplyDeleteJingle - thank you!!!
ReplyDeleteSounds like the best tea ever! My monkey and me...
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