Tuesday, January 3, 2012

A Pebble for Your Thoughts



Pebble Cast on Still Waters

I cast a pebble on the lake
and watched the ripples it could make:
concentric circles spreading out.
I wondered at this nature feat
since nature can’t be obsolete;
But circles?  Pebbles’ only route?
And so it goes, just like that thought:
one pebble – and look what is wrought…
a thought, like circles, casts no doubt.

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Note:  The form is Nove Otto.  The poem was inspired by the above artwork, as posted for prompt on Magpie Tales.

20 comments:

  1. Your poem is so lyrical ~ it moves as it is being read ... I could feel it!

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  2. One small thing can initiate untold sequences.

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  3. Nove Otto...
    I'm checking it out!
    This is lovely... reflective, contemplative.

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  4. It's so good to see you again, RJ ; )

    I love how this piece comes full circle at the end.

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  5. nice i am all for creating ripples of thought...lets toss some stones...smiles.

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  6. immisnice to read your words again RJ...thanks for sharing this

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  7. Mm, I like nature not being obsolete! And admire how your punctuation changes up the forward momentum of the form.

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  8. Thanks Kim! It's a fun poetic form!

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  9. Brian - I am so with you. It always fascinated me when I skip stones on a pool of water and watch the rings spread out on the surface. ☼

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  10. Beautiful. It flows so well and the imagery is lovely.

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  11. Tumblewords! How nice to see you! And thanks for the kinds words!

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  12. Beautiful to read aloud. And I love the questioning too.

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  13. To RR - wow! Thanks so much for your kinds words! ☼

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