Pebble Cast on Still Waters
I cast a pebble on the lake
and watched the ripples it could make:
concentric circles spreading out.
I wondered at this nature feat
since nature can’t be obsolete;
But circles? Pebbles’
only route?
And so it goes, just like that thought:
one pebble – and look what is wrought…
a thought, like circles, casts no doubt.
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Note: The form is Nove Otto. The poem was inspired by the above artwork, as posted for prompt on Magpie Tales.
Your poem is so lyrical ~ it moves as it is being read ... I could feel it!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Helen!
ReplyDeleteOne small thing can initiate untold sequences.
ReplyDeleteSo true, Janice!
ReplyDeleteNove Otto...
ReplyDeleteI'm checking it out!
This is lovely... reflective, contemplative.
It's so good to see you again, RJ ; )
ReplyDeleteI love how this piece comes full circle at the end.
nice i am all for creating ripples of thought...lets toss some stones...smiles.
ReplyDeleteimmisnice to read your words again RJ...thanks for sharing this
ReplyDeleteMm, I like nature not being obsolete! And admire how your punctuation changes up the forward momentum of the form.
ReplyDeleteThanks Kim! It's a fun poetic form!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Laurie!
ReplyDeleteBrian - I am so with you. It always fascinated me when I skip stones on a pool of water and watch the rings spread out on the surface. ☼
ReplyDeleteThank YOU Wayne! ♥
ReplyDeleteKathy - thank you so much!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful. It flows so well and the imagery is lovely.
ReplyDeleteTumblewords! How nice to see you! And thanks for the kinds words!
ReplyDeleteNice thoughts.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful to read aloud. And I love the questioning too.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Booguloo!
ReplyDeleteTo RR - wow! Thanks so much for your kinds words! ☼
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