Image courtesy of Jennifer Ardonlino/Deco Fish 4 |
Filled to the Gills
You flirt with me. I blush.
A rush.
I flirt right back. A ploy.
I’m koi.
A game of fish? I nod.
We cod …
here in our aquapod.
I’ve such affinity
for scales. Divinity
in this, our scrod ballade.
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(Notes: One of the Big Tent Poetry prompts was to write something 'as though you were a fish' and One Stop Poetry's prompt for today was to write about a work of art. Using Jennifer Ardonlino's Deco Fish 4, I combined the two inspirations into one playful deep-sea Ovillejo love poem.)
You captured the image of both prompts perfectly. Well done!
ReplyDeletea cute verse, sure to generate a smile...
ReplyDeleteI know I have said it before, RJ, but you always bring a smile to my face.
ReplyDeletePamela
What a fun splash that was!
ReplyDeleteThis is delightful! "I'm koi." Love it!!!
ReplyDeleteRJ, "afFINity"? This cracked me up. So many puns, so little time. Koi. Oy. You are my own personal giggle.
ReplyDeleteI have fun, too:
http://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2011/04/08/you-said-it/
Glub, Amy
I am smiling!
ReplyDeleteorder of the day
Terrific word play - a pleasure to read!
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