Sunday, August 14, 2011

Forward Thinking

Image courtesy of BibliOdyssey

Move
forward…backward…
and just dance.

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Notes:  The form, once again, is Hay[Na]Ku.  Sunday Scribblings provided the word prompt today of 'forward.'  I found the above picture on BibliOdyssey - and from those bits of cool inspiration, I could easily move forward, write...and just dance.

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8 comments:

  1. Madeleine Begun KaneAugust 14, 2011 at 4:37 PM

    Cool verse, cool form.

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  2. jabblogAugust 14, 2011 at 4:40 PM

    Neat! I remember making such figures with my classes - great fun!

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  3. AnonymousAugust 14, 2011 at 10:45 PM

    a few words, they form vivid and fun imagery.
    smiles.

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  4. AnonymousAugust 14, 2011 at 10:45 PM

    Greeting,

    It has been a fantastic experience with you being part of Jingle Poetry Community,

    Your poetry is sunshine to us,

    Hope all is well,
    share and have fun with our 48 poetry potluck today if you could.

    Bless you,
    with my best regards and gratitude.
    Morning!
    xoxox

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  5. Old EggAugust 15, 2011 at 6:43 AM

    I liked the way the form of this piece with its sharp edges seemed to mimic the puppets in their dance.

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  6. Jae RoseAugust 15, 2011 at 7:29 AM

    Ah yes dancing is about moving..moves you somewhere..inside perhaps..doing the MJ moonwalk back at you! Jae

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  7. AnonymousAugust 15, 2011 at 7:51 AM

    interesting work on the Hay[Na]Ku.
    love this. :)

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  8. AltonianAugust 15, 2011 at 12:18 PM

    Concise, but nice.

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