Thursday, February 17, 2011

Undone: UnRaveled Knots and Broken Eggs

I'm running way behind today, so I'm just posting two wee writings.  One is based on the word prompt by SiS/Few Miles of 'Ravel' for the Haiku-a-Thon and the other is is based on a photograph prompt by Theme Thursday.  Cheers!

Image courtesy of Maurice Ravel - Frontispiece

Ravel

a French composer
who was known for creating
the Bolero … [k]not.

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Scrambled

That broken egg
did segue
to an omelette
I et.

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11 comments:

  1. Mad cool, particularly the second one :)

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  2. Love them, RJ.
    My favourite is the second one.

    Pamela

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  3. Loved it RJ... No more words..

    Someone is Special

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  4. powerful demonstration of the word.

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  5. Greetings, how are you?
    Your absence is missed, hope you well…
    Write a free verse 4 Poets Rally, enjoy poetic friends, you are invited!

    Hope to see you in,

    Love your poetry talent and looking forward to a profound experience with your input.

    Cheers.
    xoxox

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  6. Pamela - thanks! Actually, I'm not totally loving my poems for this prompt, but I wrote them late and fast, and I also, not everyone is gonna be a winner, Nevertheless, thanks for the nice words.

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  7. Thanks so much Jingle! I come over to the rally when time permits a bit more! ♥

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