tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post829095617598625078..comments2024-03-10T04:27:35.385-04:00Comments on Lightverse - just for fun!: A Distant BohemiaRJ Clarkenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03018296461199649445noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-12187656354407433162011-07-28T03:29:55.069-04:002011-07-28T03:29:55.069-04:00Really good one!Really good one!Madeleine Begun Kanehttp://www.madkane.com/humor_blog/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-7090922186906672592011-07-26T04:20:06.077-04:002011-07-26T04:20:06.077-04:00Wonderful words. I enjoyed reading this very much....Wonderful words. I enjoyed reading this very much.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-18079742388728831152011-07-26T00:32:49.371-04:002011-07-26T00:32:49.371-04:00Loved the imagery in this. I agree, it's amazi...Loved the imagery in this. I agree, it's amazing how one little thing can bring memories flooding back. Beautiful take on distant. :)Aeriahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13023611482635389388noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-72351365411190823452011-07-25T16:58:33.143-04:002011-07-25T16:58:33.143-04:00We leave the past behind, but the past never leave...We leave the past behind, but the past never leaves us...it lays dormant waiting for some spark of memory to bring it all back.<br />Powerful ending.The Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00667034322952126127noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-78134851067336432902011-07-25T14:25:30.575-04:002011-07-25T14:25:30.575-04:00Interesting piece. Love how it reminds us, though...Interesting piece. Love how it reminds us, though we left worlds behind, they still lie close, there for reminicse...Reflectionshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09655163868990155242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-15218843918068862802011-07-25T12:32:18.915-04:002011-07-25T12:32:18.915-04:00Your first stanza, “The drums of the past beat cob...Your first stanza, “The drums of the past beat cobbled tattoos,” really grabbed me and drug me into the poem. What a hook.Mike Patrickhttp://thepoetsquill.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-24528951472051205092011-07-25T12:15:13.057-04:002011-07-25T12:15:13.057-04:00Gorgeous! Absolutely.Gorgeous! Absolutely.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-1394023984404202482011-07-25T12:11:40.970-04:002011-07-25T12:11:40.970-04:00Awesome poetry. Love the last line most!Awesome poetry. Love the last line most!Marbles in My Pockethttp://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/07/25/he-must%e2%80%99ve-been-a-good-man/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-70720664217924475812011-07-25T06:24:57.571-04:002011-07-25T06:24:57.571-04:00I really appreciated this poem. As you know, the ...I really appreciated this poem. As you know, the past is never far from my own thoughts.Altonianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02841390371168941022noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-62972922021842232652011-07-25T03:08:45.961-04:002011-07-25T03:08:45.961-04:00Old photos and postcards of towns I knew allow me ...Old photos and postcards of towns I knew allow me to recapture the sights and sounds and even smells of a past long gone...but for me it was only yesterday. I really liked this post.Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-2043052605970840902011-07-24T23:29:15.655-04:002011-07-24T23:29:15.655-04:00The past is never far away, RJ, nice one.
PamelaThe past is never far away, RJ, nice one.<br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-57255209276997590352011-07-24T22:23:21.497-04:002011-07-24T22:23:21.497-04:00Echo your words! It takes only a millisecond to re...Echo your words! It takes only a millisecond to rewind to past.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-159962633298648912011-07-24T21:32:21.425-04:002011-07-24T21:32:21.425-04:00do share any of your poems with us today.
http://...do share any of your poems with us today.<br /><br />http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/<br /><br />Cheers.Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-67238741261490071422011-07-24T21:31:48.911-04:002011-07-24T21:31:48.911-04:00love it, apt and powerful word flow.love it, apt and powerful word flow.Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-24931454188226726342011-07-24T17:33:36.270-04:002011-07-24T17:33:36.270-04:00booguloo - Thanks! ☼booguloo - Thanks! ☼RJ Clarkenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03018296461199649445noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-71399682669899819192011-07-24T17:29:05.800-04:002011-07-24T17:29:05.800-04:00Kim - coming from you, that is high praise indeed,...Kim - coming from you, that is high praise indeed, Thank you so much!RJ Clarkenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03018296461199649445noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-8433651299020827652011-07-24T17:25:57.295-04:002011-07-24T17:25:57.295-04:00Ostensible Truth - thanks! And indeed. you are ri...Ostensible Truth - thanks! And indeed. you are right about that concept of the relativity of distance regarding the emotions and memory.RJ Clarkenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03018296461199649445noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-29529690262724575032011-07-24T17:24:50.104-04:002011-07-24T17:24:50.104-04:00Daydreamertoo - Thank you so much for your kind wo...Daydreamertoo - Thank you so much for your kind words. It really is amazing how finding a snap of a single moment in time can flood your memory with images you thought were part of a distant history?RJ Clarkenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03018296461199649445noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-74625974156707942562011-07-24T16:08:18.868-04:002011-07-24T16:08:18.868-04:00I like it.I like it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-64701694331437315892011-07-24T14:24:39.610-04:002011-07-24T14:24:39.610-04:00That last line is the clincher. Gave a whole new m...That last line is the clincher. Gave a whole new meaning to the piece. I reread it with that knowledge and heard a different voice. Well done, RJ.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-11669252342512127442011-07-24T14:14:49.703-04:002011-07-24T14:14:49.703-04:00distance - distance through film - or monochrome -...distance - distance through film - or monochrome - or sepia - the sense of distance so well set up by that picture (great choice) - a melancholic touch to this piece - nice job!Ostensible Truthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08775793995809226782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-21978095717122911772011-07-24T13:41:43.843-04:002011-07-24T13:41:43.843-04:00We think we can leave the past behind but a word, ...We think we can leave the past behind but a word, piece of music or photograph can bring it all flooding back in an instant as clear as if it happened right there and then, only, you said it so much more eloquently than I have.<br />Lovely prose.Daydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-73804891044059035172011-07-24T13:34:46.045-04:002011-07-24T13:34:46.045-04:00So true, Janice! So true!So true, Janice! So true!RJ Clarkenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03018296461199649445noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-29409783545560168532011-07-24T13:14:56.721-04:002011-07-24T13:14:56.721-04:00We're never far from the past - our own or our...We're never far from the past - our own or our country's.jabbloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12176958811589489979noreply@blogger.com