tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post3721548198654493113..comments2024-03-10T04:27:35.385-04:00Comments on Lightverse - just for fun!: Happy NaPoWriMo!RJ Clarkenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03018296461199649445noreply@blogger.comBlogger26125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-21261367517023647102011-04-03T10:39:01.159-04:002011-04-03T10:39:01.159-04:00deep thoughts /ideas shared,
superb story.deep thoughts /ideas shared,<br /><br />superb story.Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-86436510770552270322011-04-03T10:07:07.380-04:002011-04-03T10:07:07.380-04:00you told the story beautifully. :)you told the story beautifully. :)trishahttp://mydomainpvt.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-79237985394034040272011-04-02T22:42:04.095-04:002011-04-02T22:42:04.095-04:00Strangers in the night. Two ships passing in the n...Strangers in the night. Two ships passing in the night. At least you will always have the night.Mike Patrickhttp://thepoetsquill.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-38622197266103779212011-04-02T08:32:35.976-04:002011-04-02T08:32:35.976-04:00Enjoyed the feeling of this. I felt that I was sit...Enjoyed the feeling of this. I felt that I was sitting in a distant chair on the same balcony, observing the two of you.nanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03445777687088584603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-2045319372844247952011-04-01T21:32:02.188-04:002011-04-01T21:32:02.188-04:00A story well-told. I like that you use language so...A story well-told. I like that you use language so well about an encounter where virtually nothing is said.Mr. Walkerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05507517064398624652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-35081229417836861162011-04-01T20:33:13.003-04:002011-04-01T20:33:13.003-04:00I Love the way you made this rhyme!I Love the way you made this rhyme!Andy Sewinahttp://sewina.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-27521848235277648512011-04-01T20:17:35.243-04:002011-04-01T20:17:35.243-04:00Fun and fabulous. The diction is great, the rhyme ...Fun and fabulous. The diction is great, the rhyme scheme lending itself to the mood of the ;piece. Nice write, again, Rj!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-53245507070583203882011-04-01T18:28:51.796-04:002011-04-01T18:28:51.796-04:00OH, so delicious, RJ! And my hope of all hopes is...OH, so delicious, RJ! And my hope of all hopes is that it was George Clooney! And that is no April Fool (neither is he)...<br /><br />With my luck in would be Charlie Sheen and he'd end up ranting at me.<br /><br />I'm at Writer's Isle this year, changing it up:<br />http://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2011/04/01/the-man-who-became-an-island/<br /><br />Love, AmyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-63541840403370274302011-04-01T18:22:07.831-04:002011-04-01T18:22:07.831-04:00This is an outstanding write! Beautifully told ta...This is an outstanding write! Beautifully told tale in rhyme...not easily done. You've got mood setting and mystery. Bravo! VbAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-72988885043157651162011-04-01T17:05:20.917-04:002011-04-01T17:05:20.917-04:00This was fun - and how mischievous to keep us all ...This was fun - and how mischievous to keep us all guessing!Tilly Budhttp://imnotaverse.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-44205655289976347352011-04-01T16:33:55.666-04:002011-04-01T16:33:55.666-04:00Viv! Thanks so much! Happy first day of NaPoWriM...Viv! Thanks so much! Happy first day of NaPoWriMo! ♫RJ Clarkenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03018296461199649445noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-68872616244333682632011-04-01T16:33:21.428-04:002011-04-01T16:33:21.428-04:00Kristen - thanks! What an interesting story. I t...Kristen - thanks! What an interesting story. I think that most people who are famous would prefer some anonymity and down-time! ☼RJ Clarkenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03018296461199649445noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-20790523614314676682011-04-01T16:22:22.455-04:002011-04-01T16:22:22.455-04:00I really enjoyed that, RJ. A mystery in rhyme and...I really enjoyed that, RJ. A mystery in rhyme and a rollicking rhythm. Great stuff.vivinfrancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07388722600118753457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-40577735099935989152011-04-01T15:46:13.021-04:002011-04-01T15:46:13.021-04:00Yes Elaine - I do love a mystery. ☼Yes Elaine - I do love a mystery. ☼RJ Clarkenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03018296461199649445noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-32216301399773976512011-04-01T15:45:52.156-04:002011-04-01T15:45:52.156-04:00Joseph - no, not Charlie Sheen. (Cute!)
If it had...Joseph - no, not Charlie Sheen. (Cute!)<br /><br />If it had been he, I doubt the moment would have been so quiet, but I swear for nothing. <br /><br />Ya never know.RJ Clarkenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03018296461199649445noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-65849206694766400662011-04-01T15:42:40.371-04:002011-04-01T15:42:40.371-04:00Laurie - like I mentioned above, that vignette hap...Laurie - like I mentioned above, that vignette happened more than once, so there are actually several stories in the poem. ☼<br /><br />Thanks!RJ Clarkenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03018296461199649445noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-66817658019750102252011-04-01T15:41:46.182-04:002011-04-01T15:41:46.182-04:00Thanks Julie! I'm looking forward to the rest...Thanks Julie! I'm looking forward to the rest of April. too.RJ Clarkenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03018296461199649445noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-24360779434609819922011-04-01T15:41:20.538-04:002011-04-01T15:41:20.538-04:00Pamela - thanks! The poem/story is actually an am...Pamela - thanks! The poem/story is actually an amalgam of several events which occurred back in the 80s when I lived and worked in NYC,<br /><br />(If you can't run into famous folk in New York, where can you find 'em?) ha!<br /><br />Although not necessarily on a balcony, this story did happen on more than one occasion. With different people.RJ Clarkenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03018296461199649445noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-91861853645465142702011-04-01T15:39:09.130-04:002011-04-01T15:39:09.130-04:00Janice - true. Very true.Janice - true. Very true.RJ Clarkenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03018296461199649445noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-21176631870252716412011-04-01T15:26:21.811-04:002011-04-01T15:26:21.811-04:00I love a mystery. Do you? If so, check out my blog...I love a mystery. Do you? If so, check out my blog...there's something there that might interest you. "Amazing Squares"Elainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04251279808111725003noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-77001506208610440642011-04-01T14:55:47.947-04:002011-04-01T14:55:47.947-04:00That was a fun read. I think that celebrities need...That was a fun read. I think that celebrities need a break from fame every so often. Brad Pitt and Angelina Jolie come here often because Brad's parents, brother and sister all live her. I think most people here are used to it and try to give them space. I think that is why they visit so often.Kristen Haskellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07481526316071592146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-41491425992777795122011-04-01T14:22:54.635-04:002011-04-01T14:22:54.635-04:00...Charlie Sheen? :)
I like the conversational fe......Charlie Sheen? :)<br /><br />I like the conversational feel of this one. A good start to the month!Joseph Harkerhttp://namingconstellations.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-24113103016379552932011-04-01T14:18:18.177-04:002011-04-01T14:18:18.177-04:00I love the eloquent language that is matched perfe...I love the eloquent language that is matched perfectly to the elaborate affair. Are you going to tell us who it is?<br /><br />~laurieLaurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-22482108844662802512011-04-01T14:13:33.717-04:002011-04-01T14:13:33.717-04:00Oh, this is fun fun fun! I wonder who this celebri...Oh, this is fun fun fun! I wonder who this celebrity of your imagination is!!<br /><br />Looking forward to the rest of April!<br /><br /><a href="http://juliejordanscott.typepad.com/jjspoetry/2011/04/oddly-comforting-napowrimo-poem-1-april-1-2011.html" rel="nofollow"> My First Poem of April </a>Julie Jordan Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06558015761690505791noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-91960857234498518762011-04-01T13:48:30.459-04:002011-04-01T13:48:30.459-04:00Well-penned piece, RJ, but are you going to tell u...Well-penned piece, RJ, but are you going to tell us who it is?<br />Happy April 1st, let the madness begin:)wonderful start.<br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.com