tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post1867606508316623292..comments2024-03-10T04:27:35.385-04:00Comments on Lightverse - just for fun!: Ruses GaloreRJ Clarkenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03018296461199649445noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-18694798533100794452011-03-08T14:55:49.702-05:002011-03-08T14:55:49.702-05:00love both forms... painful politics... there is no...love both forms... painful politics... there is nothing new... and the spin on keepsakes... the form gives more power to the story... reiterating fair game... sighms piehttp://pieceofpie.wordpress.com/2011/03/07/btp-wordle-burningstories/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-20963796886969626072011-03-06T21:31:53.118-05:002011-03-06T21:31:53.118-05:00I enjoyed your poems. It's always fun to read ...I enjoyed your poems. It's always fun to read poems in forms new to me (the Trijan Refrain). Very nicely done.Sharihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16400341099865972065noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-29322832082034637172011-03-05T09:53:20.766-05:002011-03-05T09:53:20.766-05:00Thank you, Kim!!!Thank you, Kim!!!RJ Clarkenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03018296461199649445noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-8801478128011715672011-03-05T09:53:10.528-05:002011-03-05T09:53:10.528-05:00Viv - Thank you - and thanks for the suggestion. ...Viv - Thank you - and thanks for the suggestion. I am playing around with that (as opposed to the original version.)<br /><br />Word verification? Wow.RJ Clarkenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03018296461199649445noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-15811537966227721212011-03-05T09:51:26.072-05:002011-03-05T09:51:26.072-05:00Elizabeth J - thank you so much!Elizabeth J - thank you so much!RJ Clarkenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03018296461199649445noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-2760724571660904652011-03-05T09:50:34.524-05:002011-03-05T09:50:34.524-05:00CM - thank you so much for your kind words!CM - thank you so much for your kind words!RJ Clarkenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03018296461199649445noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-82273349162292261492011-03-05T03:50:52.609-05:002011-03-05T03:50:52.609-05:00Two great poems. It's nice to see the limeric...Two great poems. It's nice to see the limerick get an airing. I thought the second was sensual and a little sad. Nicely done.Tilly Budhttp://thelaughinghousewife.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-25871651826431252522011-03-05T03:47:21.464-05:002011-03-05T03:47:21.464-05:00I like both!
rivulets of space
Due to Census wor...I like both!<br /><br /><a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2011/03/rivulets-of-space.html" rel="nofollow">rivulets of space</a><br /><br />Due to Census work for the past one month, I have not been able to visit and comment. I will be back with a vengeance after a day or two!gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-77448069439964914252011-03-05T00:07:30.086-05:002011-03-05T00:07:30.086-05:00Ooooh, the sexy one was HOT! And nice use of the ...Ooooh, the sexy one was HOT! And nice use of the Wordle as well. Who says you can't have it all? ;)<br />Amy, and here's mine:<br />http://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2011/03/05/parade-of-smiles-big-tent-poetry/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-20293144770605663302011-03-04T22:33:50.088-05:002011-03-04T22:33:50.088-05:00Funny limerick, and I love the reptition and rhyth...Funny limerick, and I love the reptition and rhythm of the second one. You always make it look so easy, Rj... like you're having lots of fun. I always enjoy your work.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-72431076759118061732011-03-04T20:37:38.259-05:002011-03-04T20:37:38.259-05:00Wow..a great response to the prompt. This would s...Wow..a great response to the prompt. This would stand-alone as a very good poem, but as a response to a difficult prompt...it is truly remarkable. VbAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-28365253402990984772011-03-04T15:33:20.197-05:002011-03-04T15:33:20.197-05:00Great style - love the currency of the limerick an...Great style - love the currency of the limerick and the nostalgia embedded in the second one.Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-87325050494398583512011-03-04T14:55:46.811-05:002011-03-04T14:55:46.811-05:00Teenage angst defined. Well done.Teenage angst defined. Well done.Mike Patrickhttp://thepoetsquill.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-64929231824019545872011-03-04T14:49:09.212-05:002011-03-04T14:49:09.212-05:00Boy, RJ, you sure did sex it up for
the wordle. We...Boy, RJ, you sure did sex it up for<br />the wordle. Well done!<br /><br />Pamela<br />btw I learned a new form, which some<br />year I may try:)flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-37285618254956588242011-03-04T14:47:48.326-05:002011-03-04T14:47:48.326-05:00Fun stuff, here, RJ! have a great weekend.Fun stuff, here, RJ! have a great weekend.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-86762750662268555502011-03-04T14:26:11.797-05:002011-03-04T14:26:11.797-05:00Excellent responses to the two prompts. May I dar...Excellent responses to the two prompts. May I dare to make a suggestion? If you drop 'the' in the last line of the limerick, the rhythm is smoother. <br /><br />As for your sexy one! Terrific.<br />The appropriate word verification for this comment is "bless"!vivinfrancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07388722600118753457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-7503449716338751882011-03-04T12:46:03.786-05:002011-03-04T12:46:03.786-05:00Enjoyed that Trijan Refrain! Great job on getting ...Enjoyed that Trijan Refrain! Great job on getting all those words in!Elizabeth Johnsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00681448814813694801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4645730964356139506.post-44337355184307091542011-03-04T12:13:06.979-05:002011-03-04T12:13:06.979-05:00Love the limerick! And I think the other entangle...Love the limerick! And I think the other entanglement is so reflective of young adulthood, unfortunately. Very well done.Cloaked Monkhttp://www.cloakedmonk.comnoreply@blogger.com